I have accumulated four-year work experience since I completed my undergraduate degree in Canada. I have almost three-year experience in teaching English in Taiwan and another two-year experience in sales man. After getting thought these experiences, I have realized my personalities and characters are more suitable for teaching English than working as a salesman. As working as a salesman, I need to do a lot of paperwork and troubleshoot numerous customer complaints in the fast-paced environment, which makes me frustrated. Even I need to take the business trips and relocation to oversea, which concerns my family life a lot. Personally I prefer to stick myself in one place instead of traveling around. As an English teacher, I feel confident approaching students and I really love sharing my knowledge with anybody who desires to learn. This is the main concern I want to go back to teach English.

Dzien dobre. There, you did after all want a Polish sentence. :-)

Since I completed my undergraduate degree in Canada I have accumulated four years of work experience. Of these, almost 3 years are of teaching English in Taiwan and two years worth of sales experience. On reflecting back on these four years of work, I have come to realize that I am far better suited to teaching English than sales. While being in sales is also exciting, it is a fast paced, stressful, frustrating and often time consuming carrer. Travelling on business has also kept me away from my family at times. Being away from home has also impacted my family's life in somewhat negative ways and I have had to do some soul searching. At this time, I have come to the conclusion that I would far prefer to teach English and it is a career which would give me the satisfaction of sharing knowledge, encourage and motivate students. Also, a major advantage of teaching English in Taiwan would be the ability to be home with my family instead of travelling. So, weighing both options, I am leaning toward a career in teaching English in Taiwan.

Make these changes:

"...four years of work experience..."

"...three years of experience..."

"...two years of experience as a salesman."

"After getting through these experience, I have realized that my personality and character is .....to teaching...."

"Workign as a salesman, I neededto do ...trouble-shooting...which made me frustrated."

"I even needed to take business triops and re-locate overseas..."

"Personally, I prefer to stay (or remain) ..."


"This is the main reason I want to go back to teaching English."

Sorry for the way I"ve presented this, but I'm sure you can find the sentences inyour original texts to make changes.